So, I have done some since last time, not very much, but a lot of editing had to happen to make space and make it look… ok.
There’s been some restructuring, a few minor changes to attachments and weapons, and quite a bit of adding new characters and places. Tell me if you’d like more added to the characters and shops. I do believe the descriptions as is should be enough for someone else to improvise, change or disregard as they see fit.
Also, be warned, there’s lots of editing still do be done with the text, any pointers as to typos, non-sensical sentences and the like would be awesome!